Tuesday, March 2, 2010


European countries are known for long term ancient history, specially the three greatest countries France-England-Italy, the most developed countries of the Europe. They are countries people would think of first when asked about Europe.

I chose England to do a presentation because it is one of the greatest countries in Europe. It is famous for Big Ben, the Queens and princes. England is the place where had historical events of human beings and industry happen.

I don't know much about the world, neither do I know about England. But it is attractive to me, I wish I could have visited it sometime in my past life. The information I am about to give is got the Internet and asked from other people to let you guys and me take some more interest in this great country.













I know two things about England. The large church with the famous Big Ben clock, one of the seven wonders in the world, is the first thing. The other one is royal people and life. I have wondered why people still have Queens and Princes in modern life. Their lives seem to have everything. But no one knows exactly the private life inside those huge royal palaces.

2 comments:

  1. Hi, I still don't know why my commend haven't shown up yet. I Just want to say that your picture from your blog about England is so beauty. I can't wait to travel to the foggy country.

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  2. Thuy,

    I'm sorry that I'm just now posting on your blog. It shouldn't have taken me this long. My apologies...

    I have a few suggestions for you:

    Your Title:
    All important words in a title are capitalized, so you should capitalize all words in your title except for articles and prepositions unless they are the first word (then they are capitalized)

    . The Great Europe Countries (you need Europe to be an adjective to describe countries)

    "About Me" Section:
    . I graduated from nursing school in 2007 after 2 years with a midwife degree in Vietnam
    . ____ United States (add word)
    . for studying (word choice & form)
    . English. that (capitalize and add a space)
    . English. now (capitalize)

    Great job! Nicely written!

    "Interests" Section:
    . World History

    Also, you are only following one blog. You need to follow all of your classmates' blogs as well as mine. I can help you do this in class on Thursday. Remind me to help you, or you could always ask a classmate.

    "Tuesday, March 2, 2010"
    . The Europe countries (same as your title- you don't need an article here and make Europe into an adjective)
    . European countries _____ (verb) known
    . countries is plural = European countries are known for _______ long
    . take away "developing" (it is unnecessary)
    . specially (spelling)
    . "the simple" doesn't make sense
    . people would remember first (what is a better word than remember?)
    . ____ presentation (singular noun)
    . Europe. it (capitalize)
    . the big Ben clock (take away the article, capitalize both words, and take away clock; the name is simply Big Ben)
    . where had many historical (omit a word)
    . human beings and industry _____________ (verb)
    . neither do I ________ (verb) about England
    . England. but (capitalize)
    . attractive to me, ____ (omit "that")
    . give is got from (omit a word)
    . _____ internet (article)
    . know more about (there is a better word than "know")
    . I know England for two things = I know two things about England.
    . Change the word order of your sentence "The huge church..."
    . the other one (capitalize)
    . I have wondered ________ (omit "that") people that...
    . Queen (plural) and prices (spelling)
    . the modern life (no article)
    . Watch out for your punctuation in your last sentence

    GREAT GREAT GREAT start!

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